The Huge Snake – Sean F and Matthew

I cycled through the forest with my best friend Matthew, by the way my name is Sean. Before we left we each grabbed a bottle of water and some crisps. We ventured through the forest but we got stopped by a huge tree that fell during a storm. We left our bikes behind and went on foot. When we got far away from our bikes Matthew stepped on a hidden plate. The ground rumbled and the floor opened under us. I said “MATTHEW, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO STEP ON THAT PLATE!”. Matthew said “I didn’t see it, don’t get so mad and also, Sean, why is there a huge clock there?” We then saw a huge red snake and we didn’t know what to do. We decided to go into the clock by a door beside it. The door closed behind us and the snake kept bashing into the wall, Matthew said this was the end.

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One thought on “The Huge Snake – Sean F and Matthew

  1. What an adventure boys, although I admit to being a little puzzled about the presence of a clock! I wonder what you might find to explore inside it.
    instead of … ‘we got stopped by a huge tree’ would you consider simply saying ‘we were stopped….? Sometimes fewer words are more effective, (and you’ve used about 50 more than your 100!)
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie (Team 100 WC)
    New Plymouth, New Zealand

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